Since we have been focusing on persuasive writing, we did a small peice on 5 reasons why. I choose why horses and ponies are the best pets because I am very familiar with that. I hope that this peice of writing can make you think the same.
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HI Sophia my name is Tamzyn I am a horse rider and I agree with your post it is very good maybe next time you could add a bit more.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie I really like your post about why horse and pony's are the best pets and I totally agree. I have a horse of my own and I love riding it. Maybe next time write what the horse is good for. Other than that you did an amazing piece of writing Tino pai-Capri
ReplyDeletekia ora Sophie I love your favourite animal it is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI like all your info on horses.
Maybe next time you could try doing another animal.